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#1 Apr 20 2005 at 7:01 PM Rating: Decent
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Place,Ronfaure
this may sound like a garrison or something,take it as you will.
(a story based on current events in vanadeil)
"We're under attack!", the sentry yelled from the Southern SanD'orian watch tower as floods of Orcs came out of Fort Ghelsba came charging inward. Some had mounts on Hill Lizzards,other with axes,and old rusted weapons. They were at both entrances,packed full of the putrid stench that errupted from armor never cleaned. As the mech. ones came forward drilling into the gates, shredding hard oak lumber into sawdust. And as the orcs tore apart the door, adventurers came up the stairs...bows raised,arms up and ready to cast and as the gate opened...things slowed down, nobody has been ever to cast a wide-ranged slowga since the D.J (Duchy of Jueno) Era. The battle carried on for minutes. Adventurers started dissappearing, Galka, Tarutaru, Elvaan, Mithra, and Hume. One by one the battle-scared stone entrancewayhad less and less guards. The horde of Orc military personnel became confused, and stopped linking, ones who had made it inside,dead rotting corpses cleaned and burned. By a half hour later, all that was left were the fish in Northern SanD'oria and airships to the other kingdoms in port without passengers.
Is SE toying with us?
Are banned Gilsellers getting revenge?



Edited, Wed Apr 20 20:05:01 2005 by gobiggreen
#2 Apr 20 2005 at 7:11 PM Rating: Decent
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/huh

it's like the subject and the last 2 lines go together and the rest is some sort of attempt at fan fiction?

Edited, Wed Apr 20 21:03:37 2005 by TseTsuo
#3 Apr 20 2005 at 7:34 PM Rating: Decent
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WTF are you talking about??????????????????????????????????
#4 Apr 20 2005 at 8:08 PM Rating: Good
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Fanfic to me is never really interesting.

But it is moderately so when the writer can write.

What I have read above is just...ugh. Why do people with 2nd grade grammar and spelling skills try creative writing?
#5 Apr 20 2005 at 11:21 PM Rating: Decent
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ok so i guess the Only thing in common is ffxi, i wrote that during my classes,i was bored,can you blame me? oh and whoever rated me down,thanks jackhole
#6 Apr 21 2005 at 7:33 AM Rating: Decent
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i know i rated you down, it was a pretty crappy post. Post a good story and people will rate you up, post crap and people will rate you down. post ******** about your karma and people will rate you down.


Edited, Thu Apr 21 08:34:43 2005 by TseTsuo
#7 Apr 21 2005 at 8:43 AM Rating: Decent
Why does it annoy me so much that you hardly ever space after a comma?
#8 Apr 21 2005 at 1:49 PM Rating: Decent
"i know i rated you down, it was a pretty crappy post. Post a good story and people will rate you up, post crap and people will rate you down. post ******** about your karma and people will rate you down."

lmao, you make me laugh Tsetsuo.
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